View Full Version : Red - Critique Wanted


Silent Bob
10-22-2006, 09:26 PM
http://www.deadparrottavern.com/forum/../gallery/albums/userpics/10001/normal_DSC_0033.jpg (http://www.rustaz.com/gallery/displayimage.php?album=46&pos=0)

First in a series. Opinions wanted.
Just be respectful of the model please. :)

Shandril
10-22-2006, 10:05 PM
The picture looks good but I think the red is a bit overpowering.

ping898
10-22-2006, 10:33 PM
My 2 cents....good pic, good composition and sharp image...the red on the back seems like a rust colored red and at least on my monitor it doesn't seem like it matches the red on the floor. I would be interested to see what would happen if she were on a black floor with that background. Also the wall doesn't seem to quite go with the pink in her hair. Again it doesn't seem like they are the same hue...

arnisador
10-22-2006, 11:42 PM
Just be respectful of the model please.

I'm too afraid of her not to be respectful!!!

Nicely posed and shot. But I have to agree that the red is overwhelming--esp. the rug (as opposed to the draker wall). it doesn't accentuate any aspect of her hair/clothing/etc., and it's unbroken. Even a dark-colored prop to her right (our left) would brwak up some of that sea of red. As it is, the floor beneath her is just to 'angry' for me. If this were in a soft blue, say, I probably wouldn't notice (but of course that may not be the effect you want).

Silent Bob
10-23-2006, 03:56 AM
Much appreciated. You can click the pic which will take you to my gallery, where you can see a larger on. (I forgot to mention this earlier)

Will reply to comments after I get some sleep. :)
Thank you :)

jfarnsworth
10-26-2006, 07:53 PM
I think the model is hot.

The red might be a little too much red but the overall picture is good.

iseijinryoushi
10-26-2006, 09:35 PM
I agree with the others so far that it is a little dark. I'm by no means a photography person; but, I would light the wall. That would soften the background and cast a nice colored reflection.

shugotenshi
02-07-2007, 07:56 PM
A little late but...

Turn the girl alittle so that her body cover up the intersection between the backdrop and the floor.

That should mix it up enough...